Friday, December 4

Words of Inspiration - The Fire in Your Fiction


Contemporary fiction reflects who we are. And who are you? How do you see our human condition? Where have you been that the rest of us should go? What have you experienced that your neighbors must understand? What have I missed? What makes you angry? What wisdom have you gleaned? Are there questions we're not asking. Do the answers of the past no longer serve, or are they more apt than ever?

Simply put, what the hell do you want to say to me? If I remember nothing else, what would you have me recall when I close your novel's covers?

Having something to say, or something you wish us to experience, is what gives your novel its power. Identify it. Make it loud. Do not be afraid of what's burning in your heart. When it comes through on the page, you will be a true storyteller.

- from literary agent extraordinaire Donald Maass' The Fire in Fiction (highly recommended)

Downfalls of a Pantser

I'm sure most of you have heard of the ancient dichotomy applied to writers. We have the plotters, those who plot their stories out before they begin writing, and the pantsers, those who sit down and just write. For a long time, I avoided labeling myself as either because I didn't really feel the need to identify myself with a group in that way. I wasn't impressed by either ability; just like some people love the early mornings while others seek out the night, some writers are able to envision all ins and outs of a story while others don't have that retention.

Great. Good for both of them, right?

Though I would really love to discard these labels once and for all, I know that I can't . . . because these two groups do exist, and their writing style does influence the way their stories unfold.

After meeting with my critique group and mentor, I've come to understand that I am a pantser at the extreme. I did, after all, imagine a character, sit down, and write her story without considering much. Now there are things about my manuscript that I need to fix, unanswered questions about the motivations and desires of a character that must be answered here and unclear history in need of development over there.

No manuscript is perfect, so it makes sense that I need to make revisions (in my case, actually, rewrite), and I understand that and have no inhibitions about it.

The one thing, though, is that most of these revisions are needed because I didn't plot, outline, fully characterize my main characters, or figure out where I wanted the climax to occur (and, more importantly,
why). I wrote a book and maintained a strong narrative without plotting, but I couldn't sew the pieces together, and that in a way has been my downfall. With this rewrite, I'm positive the manuscript will be muchmuchmuchmuch better, and I'm glad. But I wonder how things could have been different if I'd plotted in the beginning.


WARNING: DANGER

At this point, I honestly think that plotters have the benefit, and I'll be frank: I recommend writers plot. Pantsers are at risk.

Plotting absolutely does not mean that the end product needs to resemble the original outline, but plotting, characterizing, and identifying key components of the novel helps writers maintain consistency. Unless someone has a remarkable ability to retain the details of all their characters (physical and psychological)
and the flow of their narrative (particularly with the more complex plots, like mine), an outline and key information at the beginning will help - what does one have to lose? Later time revising, that's what.

A Potential Solution

I'd like to recommend an approach suggested to me by my mentor. It's an approach I have read about and didn't think I would have to use . . . until now. I've begun to see the benefits - a hard lesson to learn. The process can be used as an outline template before one begins to write as well as a way to help determine how to revise.

I'm not familiar with any official name for this process; I can't remember if there is one. For now, I'll just call it PROGRESS BY SUMMARY.

There are two components.

  • Plot & Emotional Arcs
  • Character Development
What one does is set up two different spreadsheets (digital or handwritten) and summarizes the plot and emotional arc of each scene and entire chapter, then does the same thing by marking how often characters appear in the scene and chapter and defining the "theme" that they uphold.

I won't get more specific than that because this really should be a tool that a writer can alter and shift to appeal to his or her own schedule and writing style.

The purpose, however, will remain pretty much the same - to track which plot arcs are the ones carrying the story (this may surprise you!) and to make sure the characters that should be the ones making changes in the novel happen are the ones making the changes happen.

Josip Novakovich concludes:
If you don't write from an outline, once you have finished a story, you still should be able to see its outline, the way after a touchdown it's easy to draw a chart of what happened in the play. Something must happen, and in the end, we must know why it happened. Plot is partly what you discover in the writing of a story, not what you insert. You raise questions and seek answers, connect your sentences into paragraphs, paragraphs into chapters, chapters into novels. This thread of investigation may be a thin one, but you must have it to give yourself and your reader something to look for.
You progress your work by summarizing what you write before to make sure that things hold together.

Personally, I love that idea, and I'm excited to apply it.

Please ask any questions or make any suggestions of your own below! Enjoy your weekends.

Thursday, December 3

The Mini Intern - Acquisitions Days #18, 19, 20

November has been an incredibly busy month, from the height of the trimester academically (I took finals yesterday and today - ick!), to an overwhelming amount of responsibilities outside of school. Though I've had time to blog, I haven't had the time to update everyone on the rest of my internship. Stay tuned for a bunch of posts relating to you the rest of my experiences as well as more tips on writing, getting published, etc.

Shared below are observations from days 18, 19, and 20 @ my Flux internship.

Day #18 - Presentation Matters

Today was a relatively simple day, even though the tasks I was assigned took a very long time. I spent the first four and a half hours or so putting together a sales packet of seven Flux books for a presentation that Brian will have to do next week in front of the sales and marketing departments—it included putting together the titles that are to debut in 2010—titles, book covers, authors, release days, prices, short and long synopses, competitive titles, the author bio, audience, and entailed rights. I later began to do the same thing for Midnight Ink books.

So, yes, there is in fact drudging work. I did learn a bit more about the interaction between the departments and how it’s important to present all of the appropriate information at these meetings appropriately and effectively. (In other words, as the author, you're banking on the success of workers in the house! If the acquisition editor fails to convey the book appropriately, you may not have a chance at the house.)

I think I would have liked it more had I been asked to do this for books I read and loved on my own (these were books acquired long before I began)—it would have made the process of considering the different elements of the presentation a bit more vital. At the same time, I did like seeing it all come together as I figured out the different elements of the presentation and how they clicked.

Day #19 - Developing an Understanding

I edited another manuscript for Carrie, encouraging the author to make critical changes toward the beginning. Between doing pieces of that (it took me nearly all three hours), I looked into a Flux manuscript that I am doing the first round of edits on and sent Brian more reader reports.

I'm honored that Carrie trusts me with these edits—she didn’t bother to ask to see them and I emailed the author directly with my editorial letter and edits. I’m also becoming better at sensing what types of things Brian does or does not want for Flux, and I think it will be easier for me to pick up the particular styles of a literary agency or publishing house in the future, when I do begin work in the field.

Still love it, love it, love it! Like I said in the past, if I didn’t want to go to NYC for school, I would really like to stay around here and would hope to maybe work for Flux. Right now, Brian has urged me to check out other publishers in the area and I have decided to look into it.

Day #20 - Interdepartmental Politics

Llewellyn was very enthusiastic about Halloween—the entire company was decorated and all departments served food. I spent most of the day working on editing a YA novel that I had read first for Brian and that he later picked up—it was a good, easy read, and the editorial letter that I put together was short as the author has some big things to fix but they are easily explained. I also worked on a PCS for a book that both Brian and I really liked, even though it’s not really in the Flux style. Our interrelated enthusiasm should help push it through the Vision meeting. Both of these activities spent a lot of time—I did also put together one contract, editing its pieces with the appropriate information that Brian provided, and I also emailed a few rejection letters.

The edit I worked on helped me understand editing as a process even more than I understood it beforehand—the YA novel had a lot of really brilliant pieces to it but there were general structural issues that needed to be resolved. With Brian’s guidance, I was able to put together a comprehensive list of suggestions for the author. Also, I again realized the sort of ‘politics’ that exist among departments. In putting together the PCS for the book, which has a sci-fi ting to it, I had to consider what kind of complaints the other departments would have against putting up a book like this and then deciding how to convey my enthusiasm for it.

(Again!), it was fun, fun, fun! The food was very good—the Acquisitions team dressed up as the Addams family and my favorite provision from them was Brian’s jello brain cake (yum!). Otherwise, I really enjoyed doing the edits; they once again confirmed that I want to work in the publishing business because, once I was done, the rewarding feeling that followed was indefinable.


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